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Excerpt from my Novella--A Step in Time.

  1. Cherokee_Mountaincat
    Cherokee_Mountaincat
    Loves, this is but a small piece to a Novella of mine that is currently under consideration for publication. Please let me know what you think. The young woman is a Princess in ancient Mongolian India, and the two men are ber Body Guards, Protectors---Her Kai...Ravi's name is pronounces Rah-ve. Bata's is Bahta. Chandra's name is pronounces Chondrah.
    Enjoy :}

    Inside the old grotto the two men sank into the coolness of the dark waters. Ravi pulled in air over his teeth as the water touched the sore flesh on his back. He finally sighed in relief. Bata grinned and said, “Better, Brother?”


    Ravi nodded his head, “Yes, much better. Good thing Sori pulled his lashes for me; otherwise my back would have been shredded. I am grateful to him. I know it was his job, and he had to obey. I hold no ill will for him”


    Bata understood completely. They talked for a while, just relaxing in the calm serenity of the grotto. Bata looked up toward the outcrop of rock above them and froze for an instant. Ravi looked up sharply as Bata had almost reached for his knife laying on his sari beside them on the bank.


    I stood there looking down at them, as quiet as a tiger on stalk. Neither had heard me enter, neither knew I stood there for the longest time just watching them. Bata stared at me, so did Ravi, for I stood there naked in all my womanly glory. I was unafraid for them to see me.


    Bata sighed and called up, “Well my little shadow, you’ve done it again. You may as well come on in”


    Bata grinned and said, “We trained her almost too well, Brother. Had she been an enemy, both of us would have been dead by now”


    Ravi just nodded as I made to dive in. He almost had time to yell out, “Chandra! No!”


    But it was too late; my body entered the water like a spear. I knew that the water was deep in the center. I had discovered this as a child and knew it was safe. I came here many times and had explored the entire grotto alone. As I broke the surface, I saw Ravi frowning at me, his lips tight.
    I swam over to where they sat on the sandy edge.


    Bata playfully scolded me, “You little Imp. Skulking around like a ghost”


    I grinned at him as I kept the upper half of my body concealed for the moment. “I learned from the best!” I replied.
    I crept up on the sand to sit facing them. Ravi looked at me, and I felt no shame at him seeing the woman I had become.


    We sat and talked for a while as I related my story to them both. They were silent for a few moments, but I could see Ravi’s face in the slight light from my namesake. Clearly he was angry, but held it in calmly. Bata on the other hand was livid. I told him to be calm, for all would be handled in due time. I saw Ravi shiver slightly, and thought it was from the slight chill in the air. I did not know it was his reaction to the news I had given them. I moved in close and scooped up water to pour from my hands to his back. Soon, Bata did the same. We had done this for each other so long ago that it seemed second nature to us. I came around behind Ravi and began to rub the soft silky mud on his back. It had healed enough to itch, and the mud rubbed away all of the dead skin. Bata was to my left as I rubbed Ravi’s back and shoulders. Ravi just had his head forward, a soft moan of pleasure coming from his mouth. I scooped up water in my cupped hands and rinsed him clean. For some odd reason I felt a heat in my body when the moon edged over and filled the opening of the ruins. It flooded the old chamber with glorious light.


    I reached my hands around Ravi and gently rubbed both hands over his chest, and Ravi gasped out. I stopped, fearing that I had hurt him, but saw this was not pain, but pleasure. Bata took note of this too. He also saw that my pert breasts pressed against Ravi’s back gently.


    I could not seem to stop myself. I had both legs on either side of Ravi’s body, and leaned down to ever so gently kiss Ravi’s left shoulder. Ravi whimpered slightly. I moved to rinse the mud off of his left side as Bata rinsed off his right. He was breathing a bit rapid as my fingers touched his shoulder, arm and finally chest. My teeth scraped his neck, and for some reason it filled me with heat and animal-like pleasure. I nibbled here and he laid his head back on my shoulder as I kissed and gently bit. When I stopped and came around front, my breasts were exposed to the night air, and my nipples reacted. They were stiff and tingled wonderfully. I paid no attention to them, but the rest of my body felt flush with an unaccustomed heat all of its own.
    Ravi had been sitting there with his eyes closed but he finally opened them and looked at me. So many thoughts and questions ran through those beautiful eyes of his and it filled me with a tender fire.
    Bata was rubbing Ravi’s back and shoulders now, standing in the deeper part of the water.


    He started to say, “Chantress” but I said,


    Shhhhhh Ravi” and just shook my head.


    He looked at me and my breasts but said no more. We all needed no words; all we needed was each other at that moment.


    I ran my hand over Ravi’s muscular chest and over his manly nipples. His reaction startled me for a second as he gasped loudly. I ran my other hand over his chest and got the same reaction. He groaned out in pure pleasure. I looked at him as my womanhood began to pulse and throb. I knew not what was happening and didn’t care. All I knew was these men excited my mind as well as my body.


    Before I knew what I was doing I leaned forward and kissed Ravi’s lips softly. He closed his eyes and kissed me softly as well. I kissed his eyes, his forehead and back to his lips as I ran my hands over his chest and down his sides. I ran my hands over his muscular thighs and felt him quivering under my touch. I kissed his mouth again, deeper this time, but just as tenderly. When I moved back I looked at Bata who was so close. I leaned over and kissed his lips as well. He kissed me back and I put my hand on his brawny chest. He did not react like Ravi did, but I could see that his man-nipples were as hard as stones. I kissed him again and he returned the kiss even stronger. He was experienced in the ways of love as Ravi and I were not. I kissed each of my lovers in turn back and forth. I looked at both of them as Ravi reached out and placed his hand on Bata’s broad shoulder. I don’t think he even knew that he had as he kissed me, he simply did.


    I put my hand on Bata’s shoulder and gently pulled him towards me until he was against my left thigh under the water. I looked at both in the eyes then kissed them again. I then pulled Bata close to me, but did not kiss him. I turned his face toward Ravi and kissed his cheek, prompting him. I kissed Ravi slowly once again then looked at Bata to see his reaction. He and Ravi looked deep into each others eyes for a brief moment. Bata ever so gently leaned over and placed a tiny soft kiss on Ravi’s lips. He had wanted to do this for years, but never dared, fearing that it would damage their close bond. Ravi did not move away, but returned the tiny kiss. Bata then kissed me-then kissed Ravi once more. I had a chill of desire race through me at watching these two men kissing each other as I had seen the men of the caravan doing. I moaned out softly.


    Bata broke the kiss, and reached over to gently caress my face, my neck and finally my left breast. Ravi looked at me for my reaction. I took his hand, kissed his fingertips then placed it on my right breast, sighing in pleasure. I put my hands downward and touched Ravi’s stomach, then his manhood, which was swollen and hard. It was nice sized and throbbed in my right hand. With my left I touched Bata’s and discovered that his was much larger, but just as hard.
    Ravi’s hands roamed my thighs softly and his touch set me on fire. He cupped my womanhood and ground the heel of his hand against me ever so gently. He knew I was untried and was determined to make my explorations pleasurable.


    Most Kai were the first lover’s of those they were Life-Bonded to, so this was nothing unusual. To us it seemed most natural and right. Bata ran his hands over my body exciting me further, until I felt that I was going to explode from bliss as Ravi moved up to kiss me passionately. My right hand moved up and down on his manhood, and I could not seem to stop. Bata motioned to Ravi with his head to have me scoot up onto the sandbank further. They both lifted me and lay me on the cool sand. I lay there panting in pleasure and need. Ravi kissed my stomach; then nipped a bit sharply. I gasped out and fearing he had hurt me, looked at my face quickly. I just looked up at him then pulled him to me to kiss me deep and strong. Bata, on the other hand, began kissing my feet and up my legs, from there he kissed and nibbled up my thigh. He ran his hand over my mound, bringing forth another groan of pleasure. Ravi had not ceased kissing me, and running his hands up and down my right side.

    He dropped his head to my breast and suckled hungrily. He moved down by body until he was even with Bata. I arched my back in sheer pleasure as Ravi nibbled and bit on one thigh, and Bata on the other. Ravi leaned over and bit on the inside of my inner thigh a bit sharply, and I yelped out in joy. He saw that I enjoyed this and continued on.



    Bata was running his finger around that tiny jewel on my mound now; and I dug my fingers into Ravi’s backside. I did not intend on causing him pain, but I could help it not. Bata ran his large thick finger so tenderly up and down my slit, and I could not believe how wonderful it felt. He parted the lotus-like lips there, and looked at Ravi. He nodded down to my nectar-filled hole. Ravi leaned over and ever so gently lapped at that hard little nub. I yelled out, I shivered and shook as he suckled the jewel in between his lips.


    I fall back on the sand gasping, my head spinning. It was then Bata’s turn to ever so gently slide a bit of his finger in between my lips, to stroke his finger in and out, going in a bit deeper each time. Ravi watched for any signs of pain and when he saw none, he moved up to me. He kissed me and whispered in my ear, then nipped my neck sharply. I yelped out again as the feelings of pleasure and lust lanced through my body once more. I opened my legs wide so that Bata could cause me more sensations. I kissed Ravi hard and slid my hand up and down his hardness.


    Ravi moaned slightly as he kissed me deep.
    I bent my head and licked at his pert little nipples as he had done mine, and Ravi moaned out loud as he laid his head back in bliss. I licked then suckled his nipple, swirling my tongue all over and around it.
    Bata pressed his finger forth a bit deeper and I gasped out in pleasure/pain. All I knew was I did not want my lover to stop as I licked and suckled Ravi’s nipple. I wondered at his cock and leaned back to look as I jacked him. Ravi had his arms behind him bracing himself on the sand. I twisted my body a bit, and dropped my head, mimicking what he had done to me. I had seen the men in the caravan doing this to each other, and they seemed to love it greatly. He yelled out as I licked and slurped him like a child would on a sweet.
    Bata, in the mean time, was moving his finger inside of me now, causing great pleasure. I had my leg up on his broad chest as he gently stroked that finger in and out of my slick hole. I groaned with my mouth on Ravi, and lapped harder now. I could not stop myself; it all felt too wonderful to cease now.


    Bata stopped to watch me as I sucked on Ravi. He moved up beside Ravi, laying on Ravi’s right side. He watched me suckling and lapping like a cat. He ran his hand over my hair, caressing it. I looked up at him and saw him lick his full thick lips. I smiled and nodded at Ravi’s swollen cock. Bata looked at Ravi for affirmation, and seeing only bliss in our lover’s eyes, dropped his mouth down over Ravi’s cock. Ravi yelled out again as Bata’s mouth firmly sucked up and down on him. I marveled at this; I had never thought of this. Bata did this for a couple of minutes then ceased. When he rose back up he grinned at me and then touched his own cock.


    It was so hard and thick and dark. I watched him as he stroked it firmly, marveling at how tasty it looked. I just licked my lips and reached over to touch him. He moaned gently. Ravi looked at us both and groaned softly too. That’s when Bata tugged my shoulder back down to Ravi’s cock. I began to kiss it and lick again. That’s when Bata joined me! I grinned as he began on one side, me on the other.


    Poor Ravi gasped out in complete pleasure. I don’t know if he had ever felt this while he was gone from us, but it filled me with Joy to provide him with this much pleasure.
    I giggled as our tongues touched as we lapped up one side, then down the other. And it was the very first time I had heard Bata giggle like that. Ravi had his finger’s digging into each of our shoulder’s now and was whimpering in ecstasy. Ravi moaned out, “No, no. Don’t make me burst just yet. Slow down.”


    We stopped and looked at him. He rose up and gently pushed me back on the sand to kiss me and rub my jewel rapidly. I groaned out and writhed. He broke this kiss and grinned over at Bata. Bata lowered his head and placed his mouth on my womanhood. The feel was astounding! I arched my back and yelled out loud! I nearly clawed Ravi as the sensations took me over again. He continued this for several moments til I lay there quivering like a leaf in a strong wind. Bata gently slid a finger inside of me then tugged Ravi’s head to my place of pleasure.


    He said, “I want you to taste her pleasure, Brother. We’ll do it together”


    He kissed Ravi softly then Ravi dropped his head and nipped me sharply on the inside of the thigh before placing his soft warm mouth on my nub. I yelped out with the combination of Ravi’s tongue and sucking, and Bata’s finger plumbing my womanhood. Time ceased for me and all I knew was the pleasure I was receiving. Ravi began sucking up and around my hard little jewel and it suddenly felt as if I had been lightening struck!
    I all but screamed, grabbed his head and felt like the whole world had erupted inside of me!
    Bata thrust his finger in deep at that point and I covered his fingers and Ravi’s mouth with my first orgasm. I quivered and shivered in pure bliss….


    Ravi came up to my side as I panted in wonder. He whispered, “There my Sweet, calm-relax now.”


    He kissed me soothingly and I returned it with happiness. I reached down to pull Bata up to my left side. I kissed him deeply too. I then pulled them towards each other to kiss, Bata tasting me from Ravi’s lips. He growled out and kissed Ravi deeply, his hand reaching across me to stroke Ravi’s rock hard cock. This action excited me all over again as I watched my lover’s kissing. It was so forbidden, but so arousing and beautiful. It made me tingle and made my jewel hard all over again. I told Bata softly, “I want you both to feel what I just did. Show me how?”


    Bata grinned and slid over me to Ravi. He pushed Ravi back playfully then lay between his legs, to take Ravi’s cock into his mouth again. He pulled my hand over to grasp Ravi as he sucked, and Ravi’s hands found our shoulder’s again as he moaned. I scooted up to kiss him passionately as Bata worked his mouth up and down Ravi’s staff. Kissing Ravi was so powerful and exotic to me, and watching Bata was so very arousing.


    Ravi moaned out and said, “Bata, I’m so close”


    I could see the passion in his face and knew that soon he would feel what I had! This made me so very happy.
    I lowered my mouth to his left nipple and he yelled out as he came in Bata’s mouth. Bata swallowed quickly but moved back so that I could see all of the cream spurting from Ravi’s cock. I marveled at it.


    Ravi lay panting as I had. Before I have time to say anything Bata raised up and began to pump his hand over his cock hard. Ravi looked up and rose to swiftly take Bata’s big cock into his mouth. He moved his mouth up and down as Bata jacked. Seconds later Bata yelled out, throwing his head back in pleasure. Ravi took as much of that big cock into this throat as he could and took all of Bata’s man milk.
    When Bata ceased shaking he bent to kiss Ravi deeply, then kissed me too. We lay there together, panting and reveling in the sensations we had just given each other.
    We spent many hours there, exploring one another’s bodies and partaking in the pleasure of one another...........
  2. Plumhead2
    Plumhead2
    This story is beautifully crafted with a powerful choice of words, and yet it is also very cinematic.Very exotic. I look forward to reading more (and maybe the movie!).
  3. Cherokee_Mountaincat
    Cherokee_Mountaincat
    Ty honey, but its too big to post in here. I woud love to, but theres just too much story for a small space..:} Drop me an email if youre interested..:} I have three Novellas. This one, a Native American Love story, and a Sci-Fi novel..:} Plus the Party Girl Journals, the Mastress and Boi series and one I Started called Bless me Father....but people didnt like that one...they thought it was a "Religious" piece...its Not, trust me...lol
    Cat
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